Monday, April 29, 2019

3 William, the bothersome brothers chapter 1


Good morning all!  I am not going to promise to deliver daily but I am on chapter 5 having taken yesterday off DIY and managing two chapters.   However that gives me a chance to catch up with myself. 
William returns to Portsmouth to complete the refitting of the 'Thetis'.  He will need extra men and officers [I count Petty Officers in this]  and has an ...interesting ... task finding some of them.  Add to this a dockyard thief and rambunctious Price boys and William would rather face roundshot in battle.

I will be having an unpleasant character use the N word for Amelia, which I have put n***** because I would rather not type it. When it comes in - chapter 4 I think - I would like input over whether this is acceptable as it is intended as an insult, or indeed whether I should bite the bullet and use it in full. It's a truly filthy epithet when used as an epithet.

Chapter 1

Mrs. Price was taken aback by her visitor.  He was a well-set man in his middle years, plainly used to the best, and definitely a gentleman.  He raised his hat.
“Ma’am, my name is Finch, Amos Finch, and as my little girl has married your son, I’m deputing for young William while he is tied up in some mission the government has sent him off on.”
“But he said she was ...” Mrs. Price tailed off.  William had told her in his last letter that his bride was dark of skin and that she was not to say anything untoward about it.
“Mulatto?  My late wife, G-d rest her soul, was a woman of colour, the daughter of a British plantation owner and a slave, and she was a free woman, Mrs. Price, and I will hear nothing against her, or my lovely daughter.  William was nervous of introducing Amelia to you, and I hope his fears will be unjustified.”
“I ... er ... well, of course it is up to him to choose a wife,” said Mrs. Price, covertly assessing what Amos Finch was worth.
“Good, I hoped you’d see it that way,” said Finch.  “Now as his deputy in this, I’ve come to help you all move to a nicer, bigger house.”
“I ... I beg your pardon?”
“Waal, Mrs. Price, William thought you might like a nice house on High Street, and a couple of extra servants, and a subscription to the Assemblies at the Crown,” said Amos.  Mrs. Price gasped.  The High Street had fine, tall, modern buildings, four stories and a garret, built in the Corinthian style.  The best houses in the town!
“Why, how kind of William, and of you to deputise for him,” she said, achieving a simper. “Why, there will be room for William and dear Amelia to live in so fine a house.”
Amos beamed.
“Indeed, but I bought a block of four houses as their wedding gift; two of them have sitting tenants, whose rent will help the upkeep of the other two houses, I made that right and tight with the attorneys, I can tell you!  And the choice of one of the empty ones up to you, and the newlyweds in the other.”
“Why, how delightful!” said Mrs. Price, faintly.  “I am sure the children will love it.”
“Yes, and William determined to see that any of them who do not wish to go to sea given a chance to go to school, and of course the littlest girl offered schooling too,” said Amos.
“Oh! I cannot bear to have my Betsey parted from me,” cried Mrs. Price.
“No?  Then we shall have to see about a governess,” said Amos. “A man like William Price, mentioned in despatches, needs to know all his siblings have been well educated to take their place in society.”
“It’s not exactly the society of the Bertrams,” said Mrs. Price, with a touch of spiteful asperity towards her sister.
“No, ma’am, but then you’ve raised children to make your sister hang her head in shame at how she has done less well by her children, so Amelia says,” said Amos. “She has, after all, been staying with Mrs. Fanny Bertam, so she has seen for herself.”
“My poor Fanny, she could have done better for herself than a second son, and a vicar at that,” mourned Mrs. Price.  “But she says she loves him, so I suppose I must be content. Perhaps Susan will make a better match.”
“I believe Mrs. Bertram is happy,” said Amos.
Mrs. Price sighed.
“It can make up for a lot while it lasts,” she said.


William arrived in Peacock Lane to see all his family’s possessions being loaded onto a cart, and for a moment he was shaken with fury that they may have been evicted.  Then he saw his father-in-law’s figure.
“Pa?” William went up to Amos.
“Now you just play along, my boy; I knew you’d like your ma in a better house,” said Amos.
“Well, yes,” said William.  “I wasn’t sure how to put it to her, though, or to arrange it.”
“Well, I put it to her, and I arranged it,” said Amos. “I hope you don’t think it interfering?”
“Pa, I might have some disagreements with my mother, but I do love her,” said William.
“I interfered more than that,” said Amos.  “I set John up as a clerk to my factor here, to learn the ropes so to speak, and Richard was keen for the army – the real army, he said, not the marines – so I bought him a pair of colours.  Because I’d do most anything to keep my family happy, and that means you, son, as well as Amelia.  Only I’ve been wondering’ if I was heavy handed.”
“I ... well, I’m taken aback,” said William.  “And my brothers, all of them, do worry me.  I ... I don’t know how to thank you.”
“You’ll run my business for me when I want to retire to thank me,” said Amos. “And with luck, your brother John a real help to you by then.  The other three want to join you at sea; I said that was up to you.”
“I’ll not have them all,” said William.  “But if it’s sea they want, I will call on Captain Mornington to take one or two of them. I planned to take Tom, but I won’t split him from Charley.  And Sam is ...”
“Pugnacious?” said Amos.  “You send Tom and Charley to Captain Mornington, who won’t lick your brother Sam as hard as he should be licked if he makes a nuisance of himself, and you put Sam in his place yourself.”
William nodded.
“Your words have wisdom, Pa,” he said. He saw his mother come out, with Betsey by the hand. “Ma!” he said, coming over to kiss her on the cheek.  “So, we’re to be neighbours now; you look much happier and healthier than when I last saw you.”
“Oh, it is so nice to get out of that nasty little house,” said Mrs. Price.  “Thank you, William, and for asking dear Amelia’s father to organise it.  I thought we might throw a house-warming tea when we were quite moved in; you will come, won’t you?”
“Certainly,” said William.  “May I bring my friend John? He’s a lieutenant I serve with, and also Colin, if I may, a midshipman.  I’d like him to get to know my brothers. Dear me, and I should also bring Michael Ashe, who is my ward, and plans to be a Marine, and little Miss Greene, who is also a ward.”
“Oh, William, Sam wants to go to sea as well, and Charley doesn’t want to leave Tom, can you take all three? And how do you come to have wards?”
“I can’t; but I will put Tom and Charley with my former captain, who will be kindly to them for my sake,” said William.  “I am sure Sam will settle down.” He avoided answering the question about wards.
“I ... I cannot control him,” confessed Mrs. Price, who was more concerned with Sam.
“I can,” said William.  “Papa never gave you an easy life, did he?”
“Oh Will, he was a good husband until ... until he was cashiered for drinking, and then he could not seem to stop,” said Mrs. Price.
William nodded.
“I know it wasn’t easy, and having all us boys to try to discipline must have made it harder,” he said.
“You were never any trouble, though having you and Fanny being fed by someone else was a relief,” said Mrs. Price.  “And your earnings were helpful too, I have to say; thank you.”
“Well, mother, you won’t ever have to worry again,” said William. “Amelia is a generous girl.”
“Who is this Miss Greene?” asked Mrs. Price.
“She’s a little girl the same age as Colin, a year younger than Sam,” said William. “She’s going to learn medicine from Amelia, along with Molly, the daughter of one of my former shipmates.  Amelia likes children,” he added. “Colin rescued young Emma Greene, and I rather fancy he likes her more than a little.  Of course that may change in the coming years, but we shall see.  Michael Ashe is another orphan in need of a future; and I have thanked my Maker that we had you, and even as ... distracted ... as he was, Papa was there at times.  Gentlemen’s children who are orphans but impoverished are in poor case, not being suited by their upbringing to many jobs, and mostly what they have trained towards expecting them to have a degree.  Which if they outran the constable ain’t feasible. Curate’s children and the like,” he added.
Mrs. Price shuddered.
“At least the Bertrams won’t let any of Fanny’s children starve if anything happens to Edmund,” she said.
“And nor would we,” said William.  “Amelia is fond of Fanny.”
“I suppose she is suited to a vicar,” sighed Mrs. Price.  “Such a funny, serious little thing.”
“That is much what Amelia has said,” laughed William. “I fancy you will warm more to Amelia than you realise; she isn’t solemn! And she is not afraid to speak her mind.  I do hope Sam will not disrespect her; for I will thrash him if he does.”
“I expect he will soon learn,” said Mrs. Price.  “Someone needs to do something; he is quite out of my control.”
William nodded.
“Sam! Tom! Charley!” he called.
The three boys ran over.
“Can you really take us all to sea, Will?” asked Sam.
“I can arrange for all of you to go to sea,” said William, “But I can’t have you all.  I had a mind to send Tom and Charley to my old Captain, Captain Mornington, who owes me a favour or two and would be kind to you both.  Sam, I hear you are a bit of a hellion and need a bit more discipline; and I wouldn’t wish that onto Captain Mornington, for I am fond of him.”
Sam flushed.
“I’m not a baby any more, and Ma expects me to let her know where I am all the time!”
“If you want to be an officer and a gentleman, not a boor, you would do that anyway out of common courtesy,” said William. “When you are under orders aboard ship, you will be where you will be supposed to be, or you will be flogged.  The lives of other people will depend on you doing your duty as much as them doing yours.”
“You wouldn’t really flog me, would you, Will?” Sam was shocked.
“As a midshipman, the discipline would be up to the gunner, who would cane you.  It wouldn’t even come to my ears, as it would be part of the discipline of the gun room.  And as a new boy, you would be below those who have had more time at sea even if they are younger than you.  If you are man enough to live up to that, I will take you; if you think you are going to be a baby and run to me every time you get into trouble, and expect to be treated like a precious little girl and let off duty, then I would rather you stayed on shore and I’ll arrange to have you sent away to school so you don’t plague Mother. If I do you an injustice, then I apologise, but I have the feeling you might be the sort of brat who would play with his dirk and use it to threaten his sisters or younger Middies.”
Sam flushed.
“I need to practise with it.”
“Yes, but that does not include pricking little ones to make them cry – you were acting the bully when I was last home, Sam!  I saw you push Betsey.”
“Well, she’s spoilt.”
“That isn’t the point.  You’re almost twice her age.  For Charley to push her might be one thing but you should be above that by now.  And you won’t learn how to use a dirk by flourishing it about like paintings of generals. It isn’t a toy and I will personally thrash you if you use it inappropriately.  Which goes for all of you,” he added.  “It is a weapon for killing people with.  And more dangerous at sea, when a flourish of it, plus a wave knocking you off balance could be another middy killed for your carelessness, rather than nicked for what you see as ‘fun’ and then you’d be hanged.  I would have no choice in that.  You are not a child.  You will be under Mr. Midshipman Prescott, who is thirteen, and who has killed nigh on a dozen pirates.  Only he prefers a seaman’s cutlass to his dirk, which he uses after the Italian fashion as a main gauche, a parrying weapon in the left hand.  One of our French seaman taught him. You learn from Colin and you’ll do very well!  And after a year at sea, you won’t be a child.  But I listen to your protestations, and compare you to Colin, and to little Mr. Lord who is twelve, and I laugh because in comparison, yes you are a child.”
Sam flushed.
“I can do it,” he said. “I’m not afraid of hard work, if it means something.”
“So long as you recognise that you are not always going to be told what it means, then I will accept you,” said William.  “I have limited room for midshipmen, and I had meant to take Tom, but I will take you instead as Charley wants to be with Tom.  You two will be subordinate to at least three other midshipmen, Mr. Jenkins, Mr. Lord and Mr. Jethro, any one of whom can teach you a lot.  I will be taking Mr. Jethro’s brother who may only be your age, Charley, but I’d back him to know more than many lieutenants.  He is from a naval family.”
“I reckon we can manage,” said Tom. “Thank you for not splitting us, though we’d rather be with you.”
“I would have rather had a brother to start with myself,” said William.  “Try not to let anyone see you cry, but if you must blub, Mr. Lord went through some homesickness himself for a few weeks before he settled down, and he will sympathise.  Keep yourselves busy.  There’s a lot to learn and I will be buying you all not only your handbooks but an excellent book on sail-handling.  I had to save for my copy, but I will see you get a copy each. Do not be afraid to ask the sailors for advice.  They know you are learning, literally, the ropes.”
The two younger boys nodded.
“So what would I call you?” asked Sam.
“Captain,” said William.  “A captain is on first name terms with all his officers and that first name is ‘captain’.  My friend John would not use my first name aboard ship. It would be bad for discipline.  And neither will you.”
“What if I forget?”
“Well, unless it’s because you are dying I imagine you will be teased unmercifully by the others.  And I won’t answer,” said William.
It was an eye-opener for Sam.



10 comments:

  1. Nice to see that the production line has restarted. A little disappointed as I was expecting for the Jane one that you have mentioned, not another nautical one. Thanks for doing it for us as beggars can't be choosers.

    Dave Penney

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    1. I want to work on Jane but it isn't coming so I thought I was better to go with what was - you aren't the only one disappointed with my Muse, I'm not best pleased with her either, I have to say.

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    2. I'm rather pleased, myself! I am very fond of Jane and Caleb but enjoy Will and especially Bess's stories more. I'll be particularly interested in how Sam copes on Will's ship and how Will finds being Captain! Fanny found Sam the best of the three younger boys, so I expect he'll learn to grow up.

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    3. Yes, he's loud but straightforward. I've just been writing about William laying a bet on Colin succeeding at a task and poor Colin, half the officers whose ships are in dock turn up to watch

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  2. An interesting start. I’m sure Jane will start to flow again in due course but I’m very happy with the next instalment of William to be going on with .... as well as the latest Felicia and Robin you’ve released. Thank you. (Muses probably have to catch up with chores occasionally too!)

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    1. alas my Muse is a fickle jade. But yes, it will flow, and better for not forcing it

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  3. A very enjoyable chapter. Lovely to see so much of Amos Finch. If Sam thinks it's been an eye-opener so far, I suspect he is in for quite a few more shocks. This is going to be fun. Regards Kim

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    1. many thanks. I depart a little from the kids for a while but I am rejoining them.

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  4. I was expecting worse from Sam, from the way he had been described, but I am reserving all judgement until he actually gets on the ship.

    Awesome beginning! I like how tactful Amos Finch is, this chapter really highlighted it. His interactions with William are also adorable.

    I hope the dyi projects are also going well.

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    1. Sam is capable of being a demon of mischief but he's layin' low and sayin' nuffin for the time being ... he does actually want to impress his brother!

      I LIKE Amos. I might have to find him a nice lady.

      DIY got shelved when I overdid things and had to spend most of yesterday in bed, but I did get some writing done!

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