Do I need to split these longer chapters or not?
I thought I'd post this concurrently with Dance of Ravens; this one is with my editor at the moment.
Chapter 1 Corpus Christi, tenth day
of June 1512
Huelin
Carpenter and his volunteers had produced a most spirited Corpus Christi play for us with his excellent
puppets; and we had feasted the village for the celebration. We were at our meal when we had a visitor,
eating without that all the village might feast together, with an awning made of
sails to keep the sun from us as we ate.
“Why, ‘tis Piers Alcocke,
popping up like the devil incarnate again!” I said cheerfully.
Piers grinned. He was used to my sometimes strange brand of
humour.
“Is that snipe I see at your
table?” he asked hungrily.
He was a Suffolk lad by birth and grew up on –probably
poached – water fowl.
“Do you sit yourself down,
lad, and make yourself at home,” said Robin expansively. “Pernel, pass Master Alcocke
a good bread trencher and a good helping of snipe.”
When feasting the village ‘tis
by far easier to use bread trenchers; then there is less to void from the table
after. And what our people do not eat of
their platters, the dogs may.
Piers grinned and settled
himself on the bench where Vivian shifted up for him. Only Robin and I had chairs for this feast, rush
seated affairs that Huelin Carpenter had made using his pole lathe; and a sight
more comfortable they were than the expensive and ornate chairs that we had
within. We should be ordering such in
quantity from him, and stools to the same design. Piers cared not, being more interested in
satisfying his insides than in the comfort of his backside.
“I may not be so very welcome
shortly,” he said “For I carry a letter from the queen.”
Robin held out hand for it, and
broke seal when Piers passed it over. It
was a bad habit to read at the table, even though we used our good Italian
forks in preference to fingers; and I found occasion at times to take an iron
to correspondence to lift a stray grease spot from it, for be he never so
careful, mine husband was wont at times to forget himself and gesture with
whatever he might have in his hand; and right now that was a fork full of fat
roast hog. I said nothing, however, for
it was but a minor fault.
Besides, Robin
was scowling in deep thought as he read this letter through.
“What does that rascal Tom
Wolsey want you to do now?” I asked.
“’Tis not Tom, but that clever little Spanish baggage wed to
the king,” said Robin. “Danforth, art
quite right. Women ought never to be educated.”
Most of our summer guests had
departed, but we appeared to have kept Walter Danforth.
We had also kept Mistress Isabelle of
Lavenham and her son Matthew; but that
was only until the banns had been called enough times for her to wed Henry Costyn. He had been captivated by her from the first;
and her cousin Godwin delighted to see her established and with a mercer to
whom he might sell small dyed goods.
Henry’s elder natural son Kistur was much pleased with his stepmother –
and had taken to Matthew straight away.
And it was good that little Edward
and Marcia would have a mother now.
My grandsire too had found
excuse to stay on and play with his new great grandchildren and his step great
grandson and adopted great granddaughter.
And now he was accepting Sebastian and Cecily as his own kindred the
distinctions disappeared.
Sir Godfrey did raise a quizzical eyebrow
at Robin’s comments about the queen;
but Walter gave a rueful grin.
He was learning to smile; one
day we might even rid him of his harsh lines of cynicism that a man so young should
not have to wear.
“But Sir Robert,
I was just coming round to your view that some education for women be quite
beneficial,” he said, his eyes straying half unwillingly to Maud Caston.
“Don’t be cross with me, Rob, I’m just the messenger,” said Piers. “I don’t even know what’s in that letter,
save that the queen had a managing look in her eye that put me powerfully in
mind of Felicia.”
I stuck my tongue out at him;
Piers I had adopted as the nearest thing I have known to a brother and we
bickered cheerfully.
“Boh,” said Robin in the Tuscan way “The clever jade hath me
entrapped on all sides and neatly. Felicia, I swear she’s worse than you.”
“And if any outraged
Lancastrians be listening that be by nature of a compliment,” I said
dryly. “What, I prithee, doth our fair
and puissant queen require of thy gentle self that doth so infuse thee with
choler, good my Lord, or art so suffused on choleric wrath and naughty temper
that it eateth thy tongue of fair logic and sweet reason?”
“Shrew,” said Robin, amicably, teased back to good humour by mine
overblown linguistic excesses. “It be
about that damned plotter Hamo Dimmond – fellow you killed, remember?”
“I’m not likely to forget,” I
said, recalling clearly how I threw my little knife into his throat before he
could discharge his pistol at me. I had the devil’s own job mending the
tapestry his ball discharged into. “He and his wicked tool Sir Edgar are not
like to be forgot by any of us here for a long time,” I added grimly “For the
latter’s actions cost these lands two younglings and much trouble. And I’d not like to guess that Dimmond would
not have been tarred with the same brush had he not tried threatening me first.”
We all glanced down the table
at the Aldous family, who had lost little Dorothy to deliberate murder; and at
Oliver, wounded near unto death on the same encounter, bereft of his friend
Fidel who was killed when they tried to ride out to get us help.
Oliver was listening intently as he
took his turn as page to wait upon the high table end of our feasting tables,
for we had just arranged a line of trestles for this gay outdoor meal.
I am not certain how the boys
worked out whose turn it was to serve, but I am certain that they no longer let
Adam work it by drawing lots.
Our boy was a rogue and
outrageous enough to let the other lads know it.
It was no very onerous duty we
called our pages to perform; there seems to us little need to have someone
hovering ever at the shoulder, so we expect whichever was on duty to leap up
from the table an there be something to be fetched, rather than stand ever
behind Robin’s chair getting hungry. My
grandsire tuts at such unorthodox usage, but it did us well enough; for one
might always ask another to pass the salt, or a flagon of water. ‘Twas only the filling of a trencher with
another serving from the great platters that was difficult, as one could
scarcely pass the platters down the table for their great weight.
Robin went on with his explanation
of what the missive contained.
“As we had so much trouble,
the queen writes that for our pains we shall have the doucer of taking Hamo
Dimmond’s daughter or daughters – she is unsure if there be one or two – as
wards; with that wardship our reward for loyal action. And she is most sure – clever minx – that I
myself will wish to inspect the lands and do survey and audit and be sure to
clear it of any traitors.”
“Boh, he dressed well enough
with brocade woven to his own family design and expensive fur trim; the profit
from his estate would pay to build us a goodly few mills and drains and mayhap
enlarge the school too,” I said. “Can it
really be worse than when we took over here? And look what a difference the
last year has made!”
“Lord, I don’t know,” said Robin. “Here the land was in bad heart for neglect,
but more for the despondency of the people and one or two villains dragging
them down. Once those who despaired knew
we cared, it became easy enough; for we all work together.”
“You’ve forgotten foiling a
mutiny by climbing through the jakes have you, Master
Robin?” put in Connie
Cattermole tartly.
She had been the one to escape
through the jakes to alert us after all; and Con even more obsessive about
cleanliness than I!
Robin chuckled.
“No, Con, not in the
least. But that was, really, just part
of the one or two villains. What
concerns me about Dimmond’s demesnes is that all may act the mutineers to one
they perceive as the enemy for having been responsible for their Lord’s
death. And thus they may feel justified
in attempting to murder any of us that go.”
“Zur
Robert,” Pascoe Archer rose to his
feet down at the low end of the table.
“Pascoe?” Robin nodded him leave to speak.
“Zur Robert, Heraud and me, we
be taken from Squire Hamo’s lands, what Sir Edgar did know. We be ordinary folk same as folk here, not
murderous, just at mercy o’ powerful folk.”
“Thank you, Pascoe. Would you and Heraud be willing to come with
me as voices to testify that I be no ogre of wickedness and set the fears of Squire Hamo’s people to
rest?”
Pascoe and Heraud both nodded.
“That’s a relief,” said Robin. Of course, one casts one’s bread upon the
waters, as the Bible tells us; and his mercy to the two men, swept into a
rebellion they knew little and cared less about, would rebound when we got to
this traitors’ nest, that they be able to still most unrest for none there
knowing that Robin hated unnecessary violence.
Mine husband went on, “I confess it would be nice to have some extra
monies to plough into mine own people, once the needs of the people of this
Chesilfleet have been seen to….I don’t like to be mercenary….”
“I do,” I said. “I’m part
Bigod and pure de Curtney. I don’t approve of doing something that will
cost time, effort and inconvenience for no more than a kiss-your-hand and a
sweet thank-you. The queen pays fairly
enough, I trow. Especially an Dimmond
had mustered ready money to buy more mercenary soldiers. You will do it then?”
Robin shrugged helplessly.
“I could scarce refuse, even
an she offered no reward, could I? She’s
my queen!”
I sighed.
My grandfather roared with
laughter.
“What?” I asked waspishly.
“Hah!” he said “I love to hear
Robin’s loud plaints that he utters
yet his essential loyalty within!”
“What, wouldst rather have as
thine heir a paltry creature that utter fair and douce words with a rotten
heart?” said Robin. “Thinkst me such?”
“Thou stubborn lad that
misunderstandeth wilfully!” roared Sir
Godfrey.
There followed an interlude
while my grandsire and mine husband traded insults at the top of their lungs;
and I ate on unconcernedly.
Let good roast duck get cold?
I think not.
Piers glanced nervously
between the two; he found my grandfather intimidating.
Walter too looked less than happy;
but he shrugged and fell back to his viands when he saw the unconcern of me and
the rest of the family, as we ate placidly ignoring the tirade.
One or other of us picks a
quarrel with the old man from time to time purely for his entertainment. And it allowed Robin
to relieve his feelings about having been used; for he might shout with
impunity at one who loved him well and enjoyed the exchange.
They ran out of insults
presently, largely because Sir
Godfrey paused to take a drink
that Oliver silently handed him; and
discovered the quality of our mead.
That took up the next few
minutes of discussion, all quarrel forgotten; and my grandsire was busy
determining to pay a visit to Old Walter the beekeeper ere he returned to
Bungay.
“Ah well, at least all our
guests have gone that I not need to be rude and get rid of them ere we might go
to this Chesilfleet,” said Robin. “Walter,
lad, wilt stay on here, or come with me as a good man in a scrap? ‘Twill do your fortunes no harm, methinks, to
be advanced as mine squire and companion.
Shalt act my secretary too, an you will, while we are gone, for I’ll not
ask either Vivian or Crispin to come.”
Vivian was still coming to
terms with the death of his wife in childbed; and Crispin – besides being a
poor sailor, and ship being the most practical way to travel so far as Dorset –
had his concerns as any man might about Fanny’s pregnancy, for she was now
showing quite apparently though it lacked two or three months to when the baby
be due. Poor Crispin, one would quite think it was he who was pregnant, not
Fan; but it were unkind to drag him away when finally the both of them were
happy and settled.
It took enough trouble getting
them together after all.
Walter looked surprised at Robin’s request; then nodded.
“’Fore God, I think I will!”
he said.
“Me too then,” said Maud. Naturally, she wanted to keep an eye on her
investment.
“And us,” said Pernel
ungrammatically. “Adam, Jerid, Emma and me all be good intelligencers. Sebastian
better stay at home; he’s big enough to get into trouble and not big enough to
know how to avoid it.”
“I tan get into twouble too!”
said Sebastian firmly. His English improved all the time.
“That’s what we’re afraid of,”
I said. “Another time, dearling, when you are as old as when Emma first helped.”
He frowned his baby frown; but
there was nothing he could complain about in the fairness of that.
I would NOT leave the babes,
not my twins, nor adopted Cecily that was Pernel’s full sister.
Rosa must go with us for the babes; and I would need to
take a maid, so I would take Libbe and her infant son, Robkin, whom Rosa could watch
too. She might act as maid to Maude too, for neither of us have any onerous needs.
We had no need to drag Paula and her daughters to be maids to Pernel and Emma;
besides, Sebastian had become fond of Paula and would stay happily with her and
Tibby and Tibby’s Peterkin.
Paula had expressed herself
willing to travel with us before; but I had seen the relief in her eyes when I
had declined.
As a fisherman’s widow she
disliked the sea and feared it; and although she had never forbidden Viola or
Tamsin to travel with their little mistresses, I could see that she feared too
for them.
And I would not put a mother
through such fears.
When they be thirteen or
fourteen and effectively adult they would be old enough to make their own choices;
and such she would then have to abide with.
Meantime they stayed at her side.
Besides, they had plenty to be
busy with, for they conspired with Pernel to get their mother suitably
remarried; and excuse of caring for some of Pernel’s hounds meant they might
drag their mother more into the company of Silas Hunter that Pernel deemed a
suitable mate for Paula.
He was a good and gentle man;
and had nieces and nephews of similar age to Viola and Tamsin that the girls
played with; and his ferret and Thomas cat had come to a wary truce.
I could not fault Pernel’s
plotting.
As an extra maid who might
also help with the babes we should take Sidony, Pernel’s half-wit Fosser sister
that loved to help Rosa, and had made caring
for Cecily – also her sister – her special task.
We would have adopted her too,
had we not thought she would feel threatened by having to learn to be a
lady. She was happy just to be cared for
and not hit about the head all day. I
was not even sure she realised that Pernel was once her sister, or recognised
her at all when Pernel asked that we take her to care for; for Burd Pernel de
Curtney was a far cry from the feral and dirty little creature Pernel Fosser
was when first we took her in.
In deciding who to take I also
approached Jodoc, our chief musician.
“Jodoc, you have showed that
you can mimic the speech of Dorset,” I said “Would you care to come and help us
to find the measure of this land?”
He nodded.
“Ess fay, I will do all that I
might for you and Sir Robert; though I be straight uncomfortable about spying,”
he said.
“We be there to maintain the
king’s peace and avoid hangings where we might,” I said. “You know us well
enough by now.”
He nodded.
“Must I bring all my childer?”
he asked wistfully. “It be right nice for Carenza to be settled.”
“And her no older than
Sebastian? What do you take me for? I thought to suggest that you bring
Meriadoc as your eldest son, him being a right clever rogue, and let Gawen and
Talwyn bide. I was not sure about
Petroc; he is of an age with Tybalt, our ward, whom I thought to take; for Tyb
was to be the symbol of rebellion, looking so like Richard of York as he does,
and I thought to show the folk there that he was come to no harm. And he and Petroc are as thick as thieves.”
Jodoc laughed.
“Ess, that they be….and you
generous to let Petroc learn his letters with gentlemen’s sons. If Petroc want to come I be happy for him to,
but if he wish to stay, an you not mind I shall not want to force him.”
“That is fine, Jodoc,” I
assured him. “And should we need to send
you out as musicians to hear the mood around then if Petroc comes not, Adam may
be your boy for he’s good enough to carry it off providing one not ask him to
play the lute; for the only air he can pick out thereupon is a French one and
less than salubrious that the Dauphin taught him.”
Jodoc laughed.
“Master Adam
is boldaciously versatile, My Lady,” he said.
“Aye, he is that,” I agreed
cheerfully. “He and the Dauphin made a merry pair of scullions, poking around
in drains.”
“That sound a better story
than any troubadour might make up,” opined Jodoc.
“It is,” I said “And one day
you shall hear it; perchance we will have time to tell it on shipboard as we
sail to Dorset.”
As Adam hailed from Portsmouth, which was not
so far from the Isle of Purbeck – that is no isle really, nor even really a
peninsular - he would not take long to learn the accent an he have need.
We should have Rafe along with
us too, of course.
I was not sure where Rafe originated;
for he had lost almost all trace of accent save a touch that hinted of the
west.
I asked him; and for a long
moment he was silent.
“Do not answer an you prefer
not to,” I said hastily “I apologise for my nosiness.”
He smiled at me.
“There is no need for that,”
he said. “Nor for me to keep a secret. You know I speak not much of my former
life because of the pain and grief; but the joy I have found in your household
has helped me to overcome some of that pain.
I come from Cornwall,
Mistress Felicia,” - he was less formal
when we wwere alone – “And I was glad that ‘twas YOU killed Hamo Dimmond. His face was familiar to me; methinks it was
his uncle I killed for the raping of my daughter.”
“Why did you not say so, you
daft man?” I said, laying an affectionate hand on his arm. “It must have been a
shock. We could have stood by you and
shown our support, for the grief must have resurged raw!”
He smiled.
“I love you well, you and Master Rob,” he said, his voice choking. “You have ever
treated me as kindred.”
“We stole you as kindred,” I
said. “And we love thee well too, Rafe, like a brother. Wouldst rather not come?”
Rafe shook his head.
“I know the mind of the
southern people, I can be of good help,” he said. “I might even know some
personally.”
“Will that be any risk or
problem?”
He shrugged.
“I suppose if it be threatened
to tell the authorities that I killed mine overlord I trust Sir Robert to sort
it out,” he said simply.
That PROVED how settled he had
begun to be with us.
“And ‘twill be relatively easy
to sort, he having been the relative of a traitor,” I said.
Especially for those of us who
basked for the nonce in royal favour.
What a palaver travelling had
become now we were great folks! Counting
the babes we should number three and twenty of us, with Walter’s
man Wilcock along. Wilcock was a useful
man in a tight corner, with his own unique talents, being an ex burglar that
Walter had caught and offered employment to.
We should have taken Oliver
too, for he looked most wistful; but he was still too weak, and would have been
more at risk an he waxed hot about the mercenaries that half killed him and
succeeded with his friend; being associated with Dimmond’s men as they had
been.
At least we should be able to
sail the whole way; for the stony river after which the village of Chesilfleet
was named emptied into Poole bay. The surrounding countryside was called Wytch Heath
and so we might be expected to meet some superstitious problems too; but we
should cross that bridge when we came to it.
The chance to sail being
providential we sent Rafe to Lowestoft and if necessary on to Yarmouth to
engage a ship of suitable size for our peregrinations; or at least to find if
there was one running down to Portsmouth whence we might find some local
shipping.
I might have guessed that a
resourceful man like Rafe would manage to go one better.
He arrived back on the
Saturday forenoon sailing on the ship of Master Greengrasse,
a long time acquaintance of ours and cousin of Tom Greengrasse,
the Beccles Reeve.
Rafe grinned cheerily.
“Master Greengrasse
heard tell of a boat for sale just across the water in Scheveningen in the Low Countries, that he thought you might like for
yourself, since you travel so much, Master
Robert,” said he.
“Boat or ship?” I asked.
Rafe shrugged.
“There’s a difference?”
“I think so far as I can
gather, a ship is large enough to need a master, but a boat operates by common
consent,” I said. “It’s a question of size.”
“Ar, Valkensluft be a ship
roight enough,” said Master
Greengrasse, joining the
conversation. “Her be one o’ these
outlandish types with spritsail wass able tu go awful close tu the windward;
which is what they needs in the Low Countries think on. They call un hoeys.”
Manoeuvrable then; not like
those damned keels that usually constitute the coastal shipping, and must sit
far enough out to sea not to risk being blown onto the shore, that make them
all the more unstable with the added fear of not being able to swim to safety
should the wretched things capsize.
“What’s she like on the high
seas?” I asked.
Greengrasse scratched his
head.
“Well, her has sailed to Genoa more than once with
no problem, ar, and to Portugal;
so her’d have tu sail through the Bay, and thass no joke dew a ship be-ant
weatherly.”
The Bay
of Biscay is certainly no joke.
“What crew does she need?”
asked Robin.
“Six men, ar and moostly fer
hire tu yew du yew be willin’ tu take un on,” said Greengrasse. “See, master-owner tuk an’ died, and his
widder want to sell up. There oony be one son, and he be keen to be a lawyer,
o’ all things.” He spat contemptuously at the idea of any man with the chance
to go to sea in his own vessel choosing law books over it.
I could see both points of
view; but secretly I have to say I be more inclined to the choice of the
freedom of the sailing master.
You might always study books
at sea after all.
And Falconwing was a nice name
for a ship; presumably she had plied passengers and falcons for the annual bird
auction at Valkensward. If she could
manage to navigate the River Dommel, that I understand to be much the same size
as the River Waveney, she would do us very well.
“What’s the asking price?” I
said “And what sort of size is she?”
“Her be some fifty feet long,
twelve and a half in the beam and four foot draught. The widder want hundered an’ fifty gelders
for ut,” said Greengrasse promptly.
The gelder is not so far off a
crown in value; so the price was around thirty sovereigns, the price of a small
merchant’s house. That seemed fair; it
would easily pay for itself with trading an the markets be picked carefully.
“We’ll have it, an it still be
available,” said Robin. “Perchance, Master
Greengrasse, you will permit me to
pay you to inspect her for me and check she be seaworthy, and act as mine agent
in her purchase? We will take on any of
the crew as will come with her.”
Master Greengrasse tugged his forelock.
“I be back around Monday, with
her or without,” he said. “Dew her not be so good as she look, or dew her be
sowd awready, Our’ll sail yew tu Portsmouth
fer I cin allus git cargo there, ar and sell any Flemish cloth I moight pick up
while I be over in Scheveningen too.”
It is a horrid town to
pronounce, for if you do it correctly you risk spraying everyone around with
gob. Fortunately Master Greengrasse
pronounced it in his own idiom, as Shayveningham, that it would had taken me a
while to work out where this ship was had not Rafe mentioned it first. Rafe could manage it without spraying.
We thanked Master Greengrasse
sincerely, and gave him enough gold for the purchase and for his services.
Having our own vessel would be
truly useful. Had we had such, Fidel
need not have died and Oliver not have lost the chance to wield sword in his
now weakened right arm.
If ifs and wishes were horses
and fishes, beggars at least would ride and feast. What is done is done.
This is a lovely surprise! I must say I enjoyed the longer chapter, reacquainting myself with everyone and everything going on, especially the truce between Tom and the ferret.
ReplyDeleteMistress Isabelle and Henry Costyn look a good match with the nice by-product that the Lavenham curate loses the fees of another scholar!
Investing in their own vessel definitely makes sense. Another potential money maker and diversification.
Two minor nitpicks: you mention that only Felicia and Robin have chairs with arms at the feast. As Grandfather is the ranking nobleman, as well as getting on, shouldn’t he also have a proper chair? You’ve probably also spotted the typo “wwere” just before the uppercase YOU in the Felicia and Rafe section.
This story promises much. I’m really looking forward to the next episode. Thank you.
thank you! glad you enjoyed, I like the longer chapters with Felicia and Robin, so long as I don't go too overboard.
DeleteYes, it makes perfect sense, and Felicia always has an eye to the main chance, she's been poor too long not to do so!
oops! yes, quite right ...
thank you
The evening just got better, thank you. Personally I like the longer chapters as I read very quickly no matter how hard I try to slow down. Longer means I don't get to the end so fast. A good start. I especially liked Robin's comments as he read the letter & giggled at Connie's retort to him about the jakes. Nice that Dandorth is loosening up, Maud is good for him. Also delighted to learn a bit more about Rafe. Regards Kim
ReplyDeleteI am glad! I like long chapters myself but I know they are not to everyone's taste. You won't be getting 24-30 though; 14 in this one.
DeleteWalter was intense at me in my head with the last one about not wanting to be seen as a baddy and Maud rather got to him ...
I love bringing in bits of back story
Felicia and Robin and the whole tribe!
ReplyDeleteMore downsides of being Known by powerful people.. . I may be laughing at Robin a little.
Loved the argument between Robin and Ser Godfrey.
Walter Danforth’s reaction was telling... should we invest in a Time Machine and go punch Danforth senior in the face? Either way, I like how he is coming along.
Love Felicia’s organizational skills!
hehe well, so was Sir Godfrey so you're in good company
DeleteSir Godfrey likes his arguments ... and the children know better than to be upset.
You noticed ...
she's been in charge of an artist since she was 7; you learn organisational skills perforce ...
I can’t say in good conscience that Sir Godfrey’s bark is worse than his bite, but he does bark a lot and only bites at need.
DeleteI’ll take it as a yes, then... let’s filch the TARDIS’ keys!
Nicely put!
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Great! Thank you for another Felicia and Robin tale. Keep the long chapters coming, love them.
ReplyDeletethank you, I hope you continue to enjoy.
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