warning; Sokolowski is in for a bad time of things around chapters 10-13.
Chapter 1
“Mama, Papa, may I be a page like Filka, please?” asked Joanna.
Lord Mikołaj exchanged a look with his wife.
“Gosia, it is up to you,” he said to his lady. “Filka had every
good reason to feel a need for martial training; and used it to escape from
Świnka. Joasia has every expectation of being protected ... yet times are
uncertain.”
“I understand you wished you had been a boy,” said Lady
Małgorzata. “I ... well, I have asked if Irene and Wojciech will come back and
help give you all some basic training.
Is there a reason you want to be a page?”
Joanna hung her head.
“I feel responsible for Lord Sokółowski’s wound,” she
said.
“Why?” asked her father, bluntly.
“Because if I had not let Filka fool me into thinking she was
an Austrian prince, most of which came out of my own foolish head when she was
hiding her identity, Świnka would not have abducted her. I don’t feel
responsible for my brother-in-law dying, because he could have grappled with
the coachman sent to watch him and help him grab Filka. And because Milena believed me when I said
the boy, Jacenty, was really named Freidrich Hapsburg. And it was clever of
Filka to cover Sewek’s slip starting to say her real name, and I spoilt it
all.” She sniffed hard. “And Sewek and Filka have been so good to me and
forgiving, and that poor man had to take Świnka to Austria and got wounded when
Świnka was freed.”
“He’d have done something else,” grunted Mikołaj.
“Maybe; but what if he was only tempted by having a prize like
an Austrian prince as a hostage?” said Joanna. “I feel responsible, even if more events were in train. And I have
been nursing Lord Sokółowski to the best of my ability while he has been under
this roof; but I heard him say to Lord Wojciech that he would never fight with
two sabres at once again because he can’t turn his left forearm anymore.”
“He was a noted swordsmen with two weapons,” said Mikołaj.
“What, did you want to emulate him, to carry his torch forward on his behalf?
It’s high time he married and got a son to do that.”
Joanna flushed.
“How can I be as good as a man who has trained from
childhood? Though ... though I did used
to watch and copy the drills,” she said, digging a toe into the carpet.
“Show me,” said Mikołaj, standing, and handing her his sabre.
Joanna swallowed hard and held the sabre still, in front of
her, loosening up with the foot drills. Then she went through all she could
remember of the sabre drills. She was a little out of breath as she handed her
father his sabre.
“Queen of Poland, I had a natural swordsman under my eye for
years and never realised it,” whispered Mikołaj. “If you picked that up
watching others, it would be a crime not to train you. And a crime not to ask a pre-eminent
swordsman to do it. And I have to say
that Władysław Sokółowski is probably the best swordsman in Poland. And that is
even taking Sewek and Wojciech into account. I trained Władysław after his
father died, and set him training my son
and Godson, which is one reason they are so good. The banner of the Falcons pride themselves on
swordsmanship. I am glad the personal matters between your brother, his
Godbrother and Władysław have been cleared up, the clans have usually been
allies.”
“I thought the decision was mine?” asked Małgorzata, amused.
“It would have been if your daughter hadn’t managed to turn
into my son,” said Mikołaj. “And if she’s going to go dressed as a boy like our
daughter-in-law, or is that ensign-in-law,
having our son in the Sokółowscy household strengthens the alliance.
She’s too young to consider a marriage alliance and not to train her would be a
crime.”
“As you say, my lord,” said Małgorzata with a smile. “So long
as this is what you truly want, Joasia; you’ve seen how Seweryn has run Phyllis
quite ragged as Jacenty. He’s carried her back from the hill more than once,
poor child.”
“Filka doesn’t give up and nor shall I; she has inspired me,”
said Joanna.
“I’ll speak to him,” said Mikołaj. “And you will need a name.”
“Closest is Jan,” said Joanna. “I’m not keen though. “I’ve
never been fond of the name ‘Joanna’.”
“You were named for an aunt of mine,” said Małgorzata. “And
then she had the bad timing to die not long after you were christened.”
“Why, I can use my confirmation name,” said Joanna, beaming
broadly. “Bronisława is the female version of Bronisław after all. And the
Blessed Bronisława was a cousin of St. Jacenty, so that ties in with the name
Filka took.”
“I greet my son, Bronisław,” said Mikołaj, gravely.
“You’ve been talking to that interfering English
daughter-in-law of yours, haven’t you?” said Władysław Sokółowski.
“I take that little girl seriously; she’s no fool,” said
Mikołaj. “And yes, I have, but I also
discovered that my daughter, who is at the moment my son, has taught herself
the footwork and sabre drills by watching others. I was impressed.”
Władysław looked at him through narrowed eyes for a long
minute.
“As I don’t for one moment suppose that you have softening of
the brain in your old age, my lord, and as you have always been harder on
Seweryn and Wojciech than on anyone else, I trust your judgement. I want to see
though.”
“Of course you do.”
Joanna was nervous about being put through her paces in front
of a man her father called the best swordsman in Poland.
Władysław watched without comment.
“Assume that your right arm is injured; put it behind your back
and repeat the exercises with your left,” he said.
Joanna saw her father’s eyebrows raise slightly.
She did as she was told, a little awkwardly at first, but
swiftly translating the movements.
“A mistake or two but only to be expected,” said Władysław.
“I’ll teach the ... boy. If you work hard, young Bronek you might even have the
makings of a swordsman.”
“Thank you, my lord,” faltered Joanna.
Władysław turned to Mikołaj.
“I will, at some point, travel south to see Wojciech,” he said.
“He has uncovered a half-brother of mine. Your whelp has filled me with
ambition to pass my skills on rather than whine about the loss of some use of
an arm. You’ll want to cut her hair and dress her suitably.”
“Yes, she can use some of Seweryn’s old clothes which he grew
out of,” said Mikołaj. “The ones which were too big for Phyllis.”
Joanna smiled ruefully. The English girl was tiny, especially
seen next to Joanna’s tall and splendid brother.
Lord Władysław, her lord, she reflected he was now, was also
tall, but slender; he did not look intimidating, or even muscular, though she
knew from tending the sabre slash which had severed a tendon and chipped the
bone of his left arm that he had muscles like whipcord under his customarily
black clothing. But for those whipcord muscles he would be skinny; and his long
ascetic face with its prominent nose reminded him of the falcon his family was
named for. He was clean-shaven and his head was also shaved to a short fuzz all
over. Władysław saw her looking a little doubtfully at his hair when
considering how short he wanted her hair cut, and with a lightning fast move,
like a viper striking, his right hand shot out to grab one of her long blonde
plaits and pull her towards him. Joanna gave a little squeak, and kicked.
He laughed.
“And that is why you don’t have long hair, Bronek; it can be
used against you. Seweryn’s is too fine to get a good hold on, which is his
protection. Long moustaches the same. Moreover I spend time at court in one of
the ridiculous wigs so beloved of the west, and uncomfortable clothing and a
twig for a sword. I’ll teach you to fight with a twig as well, but I won’t make
you go to court.”
“Is it true that you spy?” blurted out Joanna.
“Now who told you that?”
“Filka; she said you had that sort of air about you.”
“Ah, embassy brat, of course,” said Władysław. “And why is that
important?”
“My plaits would match my hair if you needed me to be a girl,”
said Joanna. “If I kept them.”
He elevated one arched eyebrow.
“Are you actually volunteering for that sordid business?” he
asked, surprised.
“Yes,” said Joanna. “I could help. Women talk a lot about things you know.
Milena is always full of stories about people in the city and at court, and
what she’s heard, and some of what she says sounds as though she hasn’t thought
it through ... which is why I was more of a fool to pass nonsense to her,” she
blushed. “Do you know what I did?”
“Yes; your father was completely honest with me,” said
Władysław. “He thinks you have learned discretion. You will understand if I
reserve judgement on that.”
“Of course, my lord. I
did learn a lot though, and a lot of it was that I want to make amends. I could
do that.”
“I’ve cultivated a friendship with the Topór banner to learn
about them. If I introduce any of them
to you, you can’t go falling in love and talking to them to warn them,” he
said. “If you feel someone is, or could be persuaded to be, loyal to the crown
not their family, you will come to me, not talk to them. Is that clear?” He
caught her chin to look intently into her eyes with his own piercing ones. They
were not brown as she thought they must be, but dark green, amber-flecked.
“I understand, my lord,” she said. “I’m not likely to be
falling in love, I am not sure how one does it.”
He laughed a harsh laugh and let her go.
“I’m informed that it happens unbidden; but perhaps, my little
fledgeling, you have ice water in your veins as they say I do in mine.”
“I hope so, my lord,” said Joanna.
He laughed again.
“Those who say it are not being complimentary,” he said.
“Oh! It seems admirable to me to be able to make decisions
without foolish emotions colouring them,” said Joanna. “I am trying hard not to
feel all the stupid jealous things which made me act badly. I want to be cool and calm and utterly unruled
by emotion.”
“Unfortunately for you, you are at an age where emotion rages
from all points of the compass, like a tempest trying to tear you apart and
when you try to ride the wind, you end up reaping the whirlwind. Youth is angry and jealous, and woes are more
deeply despairing and joys are more elevated and all-consuming. One learns to
control such things, but it takes a goodly pinch of time.”
“Maybe shocks work the same as time.”
“Maybe. You will come to
me if you are feeling consumed by anything; I am your lord, I am here for you.
I don’t guarantee to understand, for you are, like it or not, female, and
females are strange creatures to we males. But I will always listen.”
“Thank you, my lord,” said Joanna. He was a different sort of
man to Sewek; but he had a sense of humour, which was at least one thing. “Do
you beat your pages?”
“I’ve never had one before.
Probably, if you disobey wilfully. Not for mistakes.” His eyes gleamed
at her. “However I will punish sloppy sword work by striking where you should
be guarding, which will feel like a beating.”
She nodded.
“I’ve seen Sewek training Filka,” she said. “And I knew I was
better than Jacenty, as she was being called, and it made me angrier, because
why would my brother train a weak little boy when he could train me. Only I did
not ask him, and feigned dislike of such things.” She gave a self-mocking
smile. “I cut off my nose to spite my face; but I know now how strong Filka is
to take Sewek’s harshest training to make her better.”
He nodded.
“If you know yourself, you are half way towards being a
warrior. If you learn to read and know
the enemy as well, you will be invincible. I’ve often thought it’s why Seweryn
makes such a good showing; I’m a better swordsman but he understands people
better. Learn that from him.”
“What about his friend Wojciech?” asked Joanna.
Władysław laughed.
“Wojciech is a force of nature,” he said. “He ... he places
himself firmly into the belief that he is in the right and therefore must
prevail. He’s pretty good at
anticipating other people as well,” he added. “He’d probably make a good priest
if he wasn’t such a formidable warrior.”
“It’s probably just as well he isn’t leading a crusade,”
laughed Joanna.
“I shouldn’t mind pointing him at Russia with simple commands
like “Go! Kill! Subdue!” said Władysław. “No, I wrong him. He is intelligent
and has his sensitive side. He recognised my half-brother, and promptly took the
lad under his wing despite our differences at your age, just because it was
right to do so. He and your brother made
my life a bit of a misery at times. Oh, don’t look dismayed; I don’t take such
things out on whelps who knew nothing about it. They were perfectly normal
brats, and I was the youngest in the family, and knew nothing of being pranked
by younger ones. I over-reacted and they over-reacted to me over-reacting. You’ll recognise that pattern I suspect.”
“Yes, my lord,” said Joanna. “Do you dislike my brother?”
“On the contrary; I like the man the boy grew into very much,”
said Władysław. “But if you ever tell him, I will deny it.”
I do not know about the exact timeline of your Winged Hussar stories, but each year on the first Sunday following May 8, a procession, led by the Bishop of Kraków, goes out from Wawel to the Church on the Rock after the Mass celebrating the Saint Stanisław (Saint Stanislaus the Martyr) since 1254. The procession did not happen today, and during the Second World War when the Germans forbid it in 1940.
ReplyDeleteJust to be thorough, I will list that it should be "Władysław", not Wladyslaw in the blurb. It should be "Krasińskówna", not "Krasinskowna".
DeleteThen in the post: it should be "Sokołowski's", not "Sokółowski's", and "Sokołowski", not "Sokółowski", as well as "Sokołowscy", not "Sokółowscy". I think it should be "Friedrich", not "Freidrich", but I am not an expert in German names. When you wrote "reminded him", should it not be "reminded her" as it is written in Joanna's point of view?
yeah, I can't do any accents in the blurb. Well, I suppose I could have done the blurb in word and pasted; didn't think of it ..
DeleteBother, I thought I'd done all those.
ooh point
And I started wondering at Krasińskówna. It sounds right, but something did not fit. It seems that before marriage Krasińska and after marriage 'z domu Krasińska' were used. "z domu" in this context means 'nee', it comes from Latin 'de domo'. The same was with Działyńska, Zamoyska. I am uncertain why. Was it because of surname -ski suffix, considered distinctly noble?
Deleteheh, how interesting. Are you sure there's not some secret pact older than time between Poles and Brits which say that all rules are mutable when we feel like it?
Delete... I'll hope to find all of them ... thanks.
That would have been during Banner of the Raven ...
ReplyDeleteI am sorry that it could not happen this year.
Thank you.
DeleteAch, now I remember what I forgot to mention (and intended to do so). The Mass started with the hymn 'Gaude Mater Polonia' that is about St Stanisław. I thought it, as one of most popular Polish (medieval) hymns, may be useful.
DeleteThat is about Gaude Mater Polonia (song sung, and then a short description)
Deletehttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NmWPHOggw6A
https://polishmusic.usc.edu/research/national-anthems/gaude-3/
An explanation about Polish anthems/state songs:
https://polishmusic.usc.edu/research/national-anthems/
Here is another performance of Gaude Mater Polonia, but with both Latin and English subtitles:
Deletehttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yPakzjOBrDk
Many thanks! Music is so important in daily life.
DeleteHmm, I was listening through most of the day to a singing performance made for quarantine by actors of National Theatre of 'Piosenka jest dobra na wszystko' (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6CxkEYAt_QI). So I was inspired to search for a good translation of the lyrics and I found an article about it: https://culture.pl/en/article/kabaret-starszych-panow-polands-old-school-answer-to-the-beatles
Deletethey had cast iron ones ....
DeleteSuch a perfect title!
ReplyDeleteI really appreciate both the insight on Joanna’s previous character and seeing her thoughts. It’s good she is still struggling with her change.
Looks like both she and Wladek are growing and changing - always good to see in a character.
It’s a great start. I didn’t expect Joanna’s talent with the Sabre, but it’s a very good idea!
thank you.
DeleteJoanna is still a rather mixed up little girl, but then, Sokolowski's a mental mess so ...
there's talent in the family ...