feeling more human this morning bar feeling as if I've gone 8 rounds with Cassius Clay, my ribs are well bruised and the intercostal muscles wrung from throwing up so hard.
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Lovely! Why does Jurij owe Vicky a forfeit? Did she just make up an excuse so that she could propose marriage to him??
ReplyDeleteshe made it up...
DeleteJust one thing. When Jurij meets with his father, he is introduced in the text as Air Hetman, not as King. Perhaps you should specify at some point that he is also the King of the Sarmatian Rzecpospolita (or the reason of introducing him previously as Air Hetman)
ReplyDeletehe is air Hetman as well. I was sort of concealing for a while that his father is king, which comes out when Vicky calls him Prince Jurij. I shall have to think about that one.
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