The New Idea
Eyes-like-sky
was the weak one of the tribe, because of her weak, blue eyes. She could not see to hurl rocks at birds to
bring them down. She could only cut up
the meat for others, and hope that they might leave some, so that she could
eat.
They had brought
her meat to cut up, waterfowl in abundance, from this rich valley into which
they had wandered. Old-bones had
indicated that they might stay here; some of the older women were making a
shelter by the valley wall, under the roots of an old tree. Old-bones was almost blind, but she knew the
herbs to use to cure people and could tell them by touch and smell. Nobody made her wait for food. Big-strong had tried it once, and he had been
sick for many sleeps. Old-bones had used
magic herbs to make him sick. He did not
complain any more.
He would like
to beat Eyes-like-sky though, and he would have the chance to do so if she
could not cut the meat. But all the
rocks in the river were rounded. None
had any sharp edges for cutting.
Eyes-like-sky
was frightened. She did not want to be
beaten, or killed.
Then she was
angry. It was not her fault, it was the
fault of the rocks! She flung one
useless rock at another.
With a sharp
sound, it broke apart.
Inside was the
glinting black of the best sharp rocks.
Eyes-like-sky went over to look.
It was almost-sharp round the edge.
There was a thin sliver as well, which was sharp all round. It would be a good scraper.
She hid the
sliver in her fur garment and contemplated the two half-rocks.
If hitting one
with another broke it once, hitting it again would break it again.
Or was the
stone it had hit magic?
She hit one
half of the broken stone with the maybe-magic rock, and it broke again. Not how she had expected it to break, into
two wedges, but half-way down. Hitting
the lower bit again broke it in half and that was two good cutting surfaces.
Eyes-like-sky
chose another round stone not the maybe-magic one and hit the other half
rock. It broke in much the same way.
It was not the
stone which was magic.
It must be she
who was magic.
Eyes-like-sky
started cutting up the meat. When one
edge got blunt, she hit it with the round stone which best fitted her
hand. She would keep that one and all
the other shards.
She soon had
all the meat cut up as the hunters came for their food. She put some aside for herself.
Big-Strong
came to snatch it.
Eyes-like-sky
was afraid. But then, she was angry.
Big-strong did
not know what it was like not to see very well.
She thrust one
of her thin cutting stones into his left eye.
He screamed.
She pulled it
out, pointed to the meat and to herself.
“Mine.”
Big-strong
moved forwards.
“Magic not
enough once?” asked Eyes-like-sky.
He looked at
the fine, pointed rock tool, and backed off.
“Me make. Me magic,” said Eyes-like-sky.
Big-strong
died in the night.
His brains
were good food.
Leads-the-hunters
offered some to Eyes-like-sky first, before he gave any to Old-bones.
Leads-the-hunters
was no longer ashamed to be father to Eyes-like-sky. She was magic.
Eyes-like-sky
never went without again.
Her special
cutting stones were good on the ends of sticks, too, to kill game in pits
without having to climb into the pits and risk being bitten.
The tribe
settled in the valley and Old-bones taught Eyes-like-sky how to find magic
herbs.
It was a good
life.
Very interesting! Kinda chilling, too, but it makes sense. I liked your choice of names and language, it all flowed very well.
ReplyDeleteThank you, it was spawned in my brain in discussion with my hubby over how we first started deliberately making tools to use, and I postulated this idea as the concept of 'just knock the rocks together guys' [Hitch hikers' guide to the universe] may have arisen out of frustration, and Simon said "You'd better write that down." I keep an old desk diary by my bed for just such a purpose.
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