I belong to a facebook group where those of us who are founder members post pictures or sentences to help other writers and each other to take inspiration, and just write what is inspired by the imagery for 15 minutes - which can always be expanded later. This grew from a throwaway line in a discussion of the seaside over Heather, the true founder, riding her horse on the beach. I had a vision of a black horse on the shore, and the so-called white horses of the breakers, which became an anapestic balladic poem. It is not a happy ever after, so be warned!
White Horses and Black
White horses crashing and rolling, white horses that rise on
the sea
A single black horse gallops onwards, it carries my sweetheart to me
Galloping on through the shallows, galloping over the sand
White horses fret at the edge of the shore where the water
is met by the land
The waves shatter hard on the shoreline, the waves being
horses no more
But my lover will ride on regardless, riding onwards across
the dark shore
He will gallop across the dark causeway, racing the tide as
it floods
And when he has reached my lone island his kisses will sing
in my blood.
He will gallop across the dark causeway, revealed by the ebb
of the tide
And will gather me into his arms once again, and will ne’er
more be reft from my side
Together upon my lone island we will hear all the sounds of
the sea
And the white horses race o’er the causeway which carries my
lover to me
Oh my lover! Please hurry, please hurry, the waves are
encroaching too fast
And the white horses play on the causeway, and the safe time
for riding is past
I look out from my lonely island, and in the dark waves I
can see
Amidst the white horses one black horse’s head, swept away
by the herd from the sea.
In the morning the shoreline is quiet, an exhausted black
horse on the sand,
And the white horses born of the ocean just shake their soft
manes at the land
But the man who was recklessly riding is gone now forever
below
For defying the horses of Neptune far under the waters that
flow
Thanks for the warning. I really liked it - the rhythm gave me goosebumps and I had tears in my eyes by the end.
ReplyDeleteExcellent work!
Now that's a real compliment.
DeleteI wasn't sure where it was going when I started it, but I saw the ending, and it had to be done.