Tuesday, November 20, 2018

I'm not dead ....

I have a nasty chest infection, with a head cold, earache, arthritis and nasty temper and I find it difficult to concentrate so I'm sticking with shorts, fanfiction and poetry at the moment.  And I wanted to loose my tongue on some target or other, and politicians of all stamps presented themselves as worthy of being scapegoats.
The Pindaric ode form has 3 stanzas in the form of thesis, antithesis and synthesis, called properly trophe, antitrophe and epode but it's all Greek to me.  Argument, counter-argument, conclusion suits me well enough.  This one turned out in iambic pentameter but so long as each couplet agrees both with itself and with the corresponding couplet in each stanza, it doesn't have to be any particular length. 


Pindaric Ode to Politicians

Let us now blame famous men
Who fuck us left and right again
Whose egos overgrow, and take
The plunge into each new mistake.
They make each goal political
Or filled with gold for old school pal
And when things then go well awry
They weep and claim how hard they try.

Should we then feel it is their fault?
For who begat each famous dolt?
Did they not from the system rise
Encouraged then to seize the prize
Of glory unadulterated?
(Or lots of loot, at any rate!)
When they have served for their desire
And with a handshake gold, retire.

And yet the system is enshrined
By the insane who lead the blind
They practise by the golden rule:
He with gold gains ultima thule
Which gives inalienable right
To be the most infernal blight
And be the one whose growing fame
Gives him the right to bear the blame.

8 comments:

  1. I’m so sorry about your health! This year is just horrid - we have all been stuck down with colds from Hell thanks to my little germ factory (aka my toddler) for the last two weeks, too. I hope you’ll get rid of yours soon.

    I am always in awe of what you can do even if you are feeling poorly. It was awesome! I am also impressed with the rhymes you chose.

    Great work. Most deserving targets.

    (As you probably noticed, I caved and got myself a blog here, hopefully NOW it will let me comment!)

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    1. I'm just thankful that I've been less ill than I was last year.... and that even with a chest infection it hasn't been as bad as it might have been.

      Thank you! I can't concentrate on novel writing, because interruptions of coughing, sneezing, snot running and so on make it hard to settle, but I don't like to throw in the towel entirely. I've been writing a few poems but I don't like to post them all as most of you are here for the stories, but I like to have some proof of my existence.

      Lud, I remember having a toddler, it was snuffle city.

      hehe I hope it behaves better; I'm sorry the system forced you to cave!

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    2. Well, don’t expect complaints from me! Whatever you decide to share is always appreciated

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    3. thanks! I am hoping to get back to writing soon, not sleeping well is never helpful

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  2. Haha well said! And very appropriate.

    I've been a little preoccupied lately too - my FIL passed away a couple of weeks ago so it's been a bit of a rough time. I'm sorry you're feeling so ill, it sounds more than usually unpleasant. I hope your health stops knocking you around so much very soon.

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    1. I am so sorry for your loss, Nicky. It is a rough time and I feel for you.

      thanks, I am relieved it's not as bad as last year and I am being very careful so as not to descend back into the doldrums

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  3. Thank you for the poem. Very appropriate at this time for us. Hope you get to feeling better soon.

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    1. thank you. Yes, Brexit is a bitch, and politics are messy.
      The damn bug is clearing, as the BBC radio weather forecast says, slowly. I am optimistic that it will be gone by Christmas.

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